Romeo & Juliet

Heres a poem I wrote as for a yahoo answers request to write a poem on Romeo & Juliet

Love was star crossed,
yet hate was too great
Their hearts turned to frost
for two fools to sate
once star crossed now all is lost
Hope you like it, please comment.

The Lonely Recluse.


~ by The Lonely Recluse on December 19, 2010.

6 Responses to “Romeo & Juliet”

  1. Well crafted and in these few lines you summed up the whole story.
    Thank you for dropping by my blog.

    • I thank you for your kind words over a poem I don’t really care for (it was wrote for another so contains none of my life [metaphorical not literal]). Dropping by your blog was a pleasure, I greatly enjoyed your poetry.
      The Lonely Recluse.

  2. I know this story a lot,

    lovely retelling..

  3. Beautiful. You managed to say so much in only a few lines. Well done!

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