The epic continues

Ok heres part two of our four part epic poem.

To the king he went

To his aid he came

But away was sent

The king thought him tame

To help he did vow

Against evil fight

He did not care how

So right the king’s slight

He went to a man

Who had arcane lore

‘Cross all, his mind span

Found the trouble’s spore

A beast was the prize

Shadow was its cloak

Eventide its guise

And its passage smoke

The fiend how to slay

The wise man did teach

What words he should pray

The right tone of speech

Our hero went forth

To the demon’s hide

Out to the cold north

‘Cross frozen lake slide

Hope you enjoy, please feel free to comment.

The Lonely Recluse.

11 Responses to “The epic continues”

Another great post. Thanks for sharing this. Spending time sitting down to writing short stories and poems is something I truly enjoy in life. I enjoy reading your blog very much.

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easylifestyles said this on April 6, 2011 at 6:22 pm | Reply
- Thank you for your kind words easylifestyles, they are highly appreciated and are thankfully read. Glad you enjoy the blog.
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  The Lonely Recluse said this on April 17, 2011 at 9:53 pm | Reply
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Outstanding Poet of National Poetry Month in 2011 Award Nominations | Promising Poets' Poetry Cafe said this on April 14, 2011 at 8:02 pm | Reply
- fabulous one,
  
  please join us and vote.
  🙂
  
  Jingle said this on April 17, 2011 at 2:03 pm | Reply
  - Sorry I couldn’t join for the week Jingle, as I mentioned on an earlier post, I’ve been unable to go on my pc for ten days, so sadly I’ve not been able to keep to my usual standards. Glad you enjoyed it.
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    The Lonely Recluse said this on April 17, 2011 at 9:56 pm | Reply
HipHip for the Epic!

🙂

Luna

lunawitch15 said this on April 16, 2011 at 2:41 am | Reply
- 🙂 Glad you’re enjoying it Luna.
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  The Lonely Recluse said this on April 17, 2011 at 9:57 pm | Reply
I love an epic…i’m going to read more 🙂

Words Asunder said this on April 16, 2011 at 9:19 pm | Reply
- I’m glad you enjoyed it, even if it may be a bit of over selling by calling a 24 stanza poem an epic.
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  The Lonely Recluse said this on April 17, 2011 at 10:03 pm | Reply
Great job! I hope there is another chapter.

Shelli Carlisle said this on April 17, 2011 at 12:37 am | Reply
- Thank you, I’m glad you liked it. There are four posts of six stanzas, this is the second, so there are two more after this.
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  The Lonely Recluse said this on April 17, 2011 at 10:06 pm | Reply

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