Death, Doom, Destruction
I don’t know about you but all I think I ever hear on the news is something not too dissimilar to this poem.
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Death, Doom, Destruction
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A man is stabbed to death
For naught but his left shoe
Killer’s on crystal meth
Cops’ didn’t have a clue.
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Death, Doom, Destruction
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The world is gonna end
Or so says some odd bloke
In a book he just penned
Wonder what’s in his smoke
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Death, Doom, Destruction
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Yet another bomb sent
To an innocent town
For them it was not meant
Says the nation’s top clown
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Death, Doom, Destruction
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And in other news here’s a puppy.
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Hope you enjoy, please feel free to comment.
The Lonely Recluse.
Thank God for the puppy 🙂
ZQ said this on August 4, 2011 at 7:29 pm |
Exactly the view of the news crews.
The Lonely Recluse.
The Lonely Recluse said this on August 4, 2011 at 8:56 pm |
Like!
Reading this one makes me feel like I’m reading my old Literature textbook.
I love the flow on each of your poems as well! Your pieces are easy to read and they don’t bore. 🙂
Btw, found you through Promising Poets’ Poetry Cafe. 🙂
Jess Fuentes said this on August 6, 2011 at 5:29 pm |
I never enjoyed Lit, so whether to take that as an insult or compliment is questionable in my mind. Thank you so very much for words of such high praise, I’m sure I don’t deserve it. I’m truly glad you enjoy my poetry so much.
The Lonely Recluse.
The Lonely Recluse said this on August 14, 2011 at 4:49 pm |
Interesting topic and a great way to approach it. Very good use of rhyme also.
Here is my entry: http://www.jackedwardspoetry.blogspot.com/2011/12/sorry-performance-poem.html
Jack Edwards said this on January 21, 2012 at 2:40 am |
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it, it’s all that seems to be on the news.
The Lonely Recluse.
The Lonely Recluse said this on January 23, 2012 at 1:16 am |
a puppy is involved, wow, amazing one.
Taylor said this on January 21, 2012 at 7:14 pm |
It’s the news, there always has to be a happy end, no matter how much crap is really happening.
The Lonely Recluse.
The Lonely Recluse said this on January 23, 2012 at 1:13 am |
i like the last stanza best
Orion’s Armament
zongrik said this on January 22, 2012 at 8:33 pm |
The last proper stanza or the puppy comment :)? Glad you enjoyed it.
The Lonely Recluse.
The Lonely Recluse said this on January 23, 2012 at 1:12 am |
sad, powerful,
Glad to see you share.
Taylor said this on January 28, 2012 at 2:51 am |
True too. Glad you enjoyed it.
The Lonely Recluse.
The Lonely Recluse said this on January 28, 2012 at 3:16 am |