Breaking The Silence

This is my second half etheree poem, sadly I still haven’t written a full one, getting from the five to ten syllables and back is harder than one through five.

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Smash

Breaking

The silence

In my dull life

With sustained violence

Then exhaustion

Once again

Silence

Falls

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Hope you enjoy, please feel free to comment.

The Lonely Recluse.

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~ by The Lonely Recluse on August 10, 2011.

2 Responses to “Breaking The Silence”

  1. Totally with you – I can feel the atmosphere right in the air this moment. Can I safely guess that it’s about the ongoing riots?

    • Actually this was written a fair while before the riots, but I can see why you’d ask if they were the subject. It’s more about the misanthropy that can descend upon me when there is too much noise from too many people. Glad you enjoyed it though.
      The Lonely Recluse.

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