Twisting and turning.

A poem i just scribbled down without knowing where to go with it, I had the first line and that was it, this is what it turned into.

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Twisting and turning

Branding and burning

Waxing and waning

Faking and feigning

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And so turns the world

A beaker being whirled

All blended to fun

All together one.

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Hope you enjoy, please feel free to comment.

The Lonely Recluse.

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~ by The Lonely Recluse on March 3, 2012.

4 Responses to “Twisting and turning.”

  1. It was fluid. It’s a blend of everything into one, a mix and it did successfully combined to form one successful piece 🙂

  2. This became extremely visual as I read it. It definitely worked for me! Very nice!

    • I think that may be because I just let my thoughts coalesce to write it, I didn’t have a clue except for the first line, I just let it write instead of forming it, maybe that’s why it was a visual poem for you. I don’t know. Glad you enjoyed it.
      The Lonely Recluse.

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