Time.
I set a challenge on The Escapism Project to write a poem about a rose without mentioning the words rose or flower, this was the prize for the winner.
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Time is fleeting
Time is gone
Since our greeting
Time is gone
Like a river
Flowing past
With a shiver
Gone so fast
What can remain
What can stay
We start to wane
Fade to grey
Time is fleeting
Time is gone
Since our greeting
Time is gone
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Hope you enjoy, please feel free to comment.
The Lonely Recluse.
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The Lonely Recluse
From beginning to end this holds you in melancholy that is nearly as transient as the subject. Beautifully done.
Not much I can say to praise like that other than thank you.
The Lonely Recluse.
Smooth delivery and it kinda rhymed when I read it aloud. It feels like a poem to illustrate the richness of time, how we should treasure it else it will just pass us by!
It should rhyme, it is ABAB rhymed, I hope, it was supposed to be at least. Yeah, that was more or less the plan. Glad you enjoyed it.
The Lonely Recluse.